Friday, April 26, 2013


  • Read.
  • Compare and contrast paragraph and graphic organizer due Monday

Answer to editing bonus:
The swan was moving.  It seemed to glide, peacefully at first; then it reared up, flapping its great wings.  She saw an arrow come slowly out of the trees and pierce its breast.

( corrections:  sentence combining to avoid run-on and rambling structures, wrong words, repetitions) 

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